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Medicine Den Gossip (Warrior Cats)

WarriorCat3042

Published: Apr 13, 2017

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Description

Idk why I drew this, I've just had art block and had to do SOMETHING

Here we have Jayfeather, Briarlight, and Leafpool talking about... drama? Like I said this was kinda random since I started like 10 other drawing but scrapped all of them, I just forced myself to finish this one lol

I also did this to practice backgrounds in SAI, and I honestly like the result better than the backgrounds In Photoshop Elements.

I also changed my style a bit since I was unhappy with my last one.

Hope you like it!

Will a speedpaint exist for this? We'll see

Image size

4000x3394px 10.94 MB

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CiderWolf

May 29, 2017

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_{Now, there are some positives and negatives in this piece, but overall it's great.
Let's start off with the positives,
1. The tabby marks are rather well done and add extra detail to this artwork.
2. The shading and lighting are nearly perfect, and the blobs of half-assed shading aren't present.
3. The background is lovely! Although, something good to keep in mind is that water is blue because the sky reflects of of it. The water, since not completely in the sun, shouldn't be that blue. Also, water (Sometimes) reflects images of objects. (Although, I have yet to figure that out in my own art haha!)
4. This piece is actually very original! I haven't seen anything with Leafpool, Jayfeather and Briarlight together until now.

And now time for the negatives.
1. The eye detail can be worked on, especially Jayfeather's eye. His eye seems unsettling to me. Leafpool's eyes seem to bulge out of her head, her eyes are abnormally large.
2. It apears Jayfeather's hind leg on the right appears to be twisted. The current cat anatomy you're working with is okay, but I'd try to make a few things (including the eyes) a bit more realistic.
3. Jayfeather and Leafpool's backs appear to shine like plastic, and that's strange to see on a cat, unless they have been coated in wax.
4. There's something beneath Jayfeather's left front paw, and that seemed a little strange. Perhaps you forgot to shade in that area?

To be honest, it's a piece of amazing art, however, there are a few things that can be tweaked, but at least you tried, right?
-Cider}