Fought Like a Warrior

I redid this scene for like, the fourth time XD It's a good way to map my progress.

Characters: Shimmerpaw (silver tabby she-cat) Splinter (Dark grey tabby tom) Leaf (brown tabby tom) Rain (ginger she-cat)

Story: Shimmerpaw gets upset after a fight with her brother, and runs out of camp. She ends up in the twoleg place, and gets lost. She see's 3 other cats (Rain, Splinter, and Leaf) and decides to ask for help. It turns out she is on their territory, so they attack her. Shimmerpaw fights her best, but considering she was only a half trained apprentice, is unable to beat them and gets fatally wounded in the chest by leaf. 

I've said this before, but I didn't bother putting a mature content warning on, if anyone feels it needed, tell me and I will put it on.